Image Information: A creepy closet door that I imagine would fit in very well in this story. Source: healingthoughtsblog.com |
The whole of Angria knew of the dangers that the dark.
Centuries of cohabitation with mythical creatures had made the people wary of the
creatures that were active during the night. Everyone who had lived in Angria
knew of this self-imposed curfew and knew well to abide by it. But
unfortunately, this commonality was not shared with outsiders. The Angrians
looked after their own, which worked out fine because Angria got very few
visitors.
Except one
day, they did get a visitor. A young man came to Angria in the middle of his
travels. Except he came at night.
Grear had
thought that his travels would be filled with adventure. After setting out from
his parent’s home at the age of sixteen, he thought that danger would be within
arm’s reach at any point in his journey, but the reality is that although he
had been traveling for a few years now, Grear had yet to meet even a single
mythical creature.
So coming
into Angria and seeing the whole town basically void of all human life, Grear
thought nothing of it and instead set out to find a small place to stay for the
rest of the night. Completely oblivious to the idea of danger present in
Angria, he set out into the woods and after some wandering came across a small
cottage with a barn in the back. Unthinkingly, he entered the barn, made the loft
into his own personal room, and quickly fell into a deep sleep.
But he was
woken up only hours later when he sensed a presence surrounding him. Rolling
over and clutching his bag to his chest he called out a sleepy “Is there
anybody there,” mumbling and rubbing at his eyes.
“I am.”
Came a scratchy voice from the opposite side of the room. His eyes immediately
sought out the source of the voice and he scrambled to his feet. “Come child,
it is too cold to be sleeping in the barn of a stranger,” she beckoned with her
hand and made to climb back down the stairs into the loft, “I have a room that
will be much, much better for you. And for me as well.”
And Grear,
fearing nothing, for what could an old woman do to him in the worst case
scenario, packs his things and begins to follow her into her small cottage.
“The room
is just through that door, my dear,” she said, pointing at a door in the far
corner of the room. “Just go ahead and get comfortable in there and I will
bring you some extra blankets in a moment.”
Groggily,
Grear made his way to the aforementioned room and began searching for the light
switch. Dropping his bag at the door and rubbing his hands along the wall,
stumbling around searching for the bed, Grear was startled by the sound of a
soft clicking. Spinning around, he immediately threw out his hands and stumbled
his way back to where he thought the door had been. Only to find that the door
had been locked behind him.
Falling to
his knees at this discovery, all Grear could think was that he had finally
found his adventure.
Author’s Note:
I wrote this story based on the Japanese Fairy Tales (Ozaki)
story, The Goblin of Adachigahara. I
was really inspired by the grotesque amounts of cannibalism that were present
in a lot of stories as well as having seemingly fragile characters suddenly
become the antagonists. Plus, the room in this story was creepy as all get out
and I could not begin to imagine how this poor old lady managed to get her victims
into her small killing room. It was all just crazy.
Hi Amanda!
ReplyDeleteI see that you chose the unit over the Japanese fairy tales. They are all kinda creepy huh? Perfect for this time of year with Halloween around the corner, we all like a little spookiness sometimes. It's so strange to me how the a lot of the Asian cultures have fairy tales that do not even come close to having the typical happy ending that we are used to. You did a great job of using words that are so visual. The very first line of the first paragraph you tell us that,"The whole of Angria knew of the dangers that the dark." But I am not sure what exactly what you want us to know here. Is it dangers that the dark brings? Or is it dangers of the dark? This is the only thing I saw in your story that I saw that gave me pause. Great job!
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this. I was somewhat confused by the first sentence. I feel like a word is missing or something. As I continued to read I could picture it with your descriptive imagery. I haven't read any of the Asian stories like this. After your reading your author's note, it has peaked my interest to look into one of these stories for an extra reading another week. Excellent job!